docs(connector): apple readme (zh-CN) (#1464)

packages/connector-apple/README.md

@@ -1,21 +1,29 @@
-### Apple connector
+# Apple connector
 
 The official Logto connector for Apple social sign-in.
 
-Apple 社交登录 Logto 官方连接器 [中文文档](#)
+Apple 社交登录 Logto 官方连接器 [中文文档](#apple-连接器)
 
 **Table of contents**
 
-- [Get started](#get-started)
-  - [Enable Sign in with Apple for your app](#enable-sign-in-with-apple-for-your-app)
-  - [Create an identifier](#create-an-identifier)
-  - [Enable Sign in with Apple for your identifier](#enable-sign-in-with-apple-for-your-identifier)
-- [Compose the connector JSON](#compose-the-connector-json)
-- [Test Apple connector](#test-apple-connector)
+- [Apple connector](#apple-connector)
+  - [Get started](#get-started)
+    - [Enable Sign in with Apple for your app](#enable-sign-in-with-apple-for-your-app)
+    - [Create an identifier](#create-an-identifier)
+    - [Enable Sign in with Apple for your identifier](#enable-sign-in-with-apple-for-your-identifier)
+  - [Compose the connector JSON](#compose-the-connector-json)
+  - [Test Apple connector](#test-apple-connector)
+- [Apple 连接器](#apple-连接器)
+  - [开始上手](#开始上手)
+    - [为你的应用启用「通过 Apple 登录」](#为你的应用启用通过-apple-登录)
+    - [创建一个 identifier](#创建一个-identifier)
+    - [为你的 identifier 启用「通过 Apple 登录」](#为你的-identifier-启用通过-apple-登录)
+  - [编写连接器的 JSON](#编写连接器的-json)
+  - [测试 Apple 连接器](#测试-apple-连接器)
 
 ## Get started
 
-If you don't know the concept of the connector or haven't added this connector to your Sign-in experience yet, please see [Logto tutorial](https://docs.logto.io/docs/tutorials/get-started/enable-social-sign-in).
+If you don't know the concept of the connector or don't know how to add this connector to your Sign-in experience, please see [Logto tutorial](https://docs.logto.io/docs/tutorials/get-started/enable-social-sign-in).
 
 > ℹ️ **Note**
 > 
@@ -28,7 +36,7 @@ You need to enroll [Apple Developer Program](https://developer.apple.com/program
 
 > ⚠️ **Caution**
 > 
-> Even if you want to implement Sign in with Apple on a web app only, you still need to have an existing app that embraces the AppStore ecosystem (i.e., a valid App ID).
+> Even if you want to implement Sign in with Apple on a web app only, you still need to have an existing app that embraces the AppStore ecosystem (i.e., have a valid App ID).
 
 You can do it via Xcode -> Project settings -> Signing & Capabilities, or visit [Certificates, Identifiers & Profiles](https://developer.apple.com/account/resources/identifiers/list/bundleId).
 
@@ -49,7 +57,7 @@ Click the identifier you just created. Check "Sign in with Apple" on the details
 
 ![Enable Sign in with Apple](/packages/connector-apple/docs/enable-sign-in-with-apple.png)
 
-In the opening modal, select the App ID you just enabled.
+In the opening modal, select the App ID you just enabled Sign in with Apple.
 
 Enter the domain of your Logto instance without protocol and port, e.g., `your.logto.domain`; then enter the "Return URL" (i.e., Redirect URI), which is the Logto URL with `/callback/apple-universal`, e.g., `https://your.logto.domain/callback/apple-universal`.
 
@@ -59,7 +67,7 @@ Click "Next" then "Done" to close the modal. Click "Continue" on the top-right c
 
 > ⚠️ **Caution**
 > 
-> Apple does NOT allow HTTP protocol and `localhost` domain.
+> Apple does NOT allow Return URLs with HTTP protocol and `localhost` domain.
 > 
 > If you want to test locally, you need to edit `/etc/hosts` file to map localhost to a custom domain and set up a local HTTPS environment. [mkcert](https://github.com/FiloSottile/mkcert) can help you for setting up local HTTPS.
 
@@ -76,3 +84,69 @@ You need to use the identifier that fills in the [Create an identifier](#create-
 ## Test Apple connector
 
 That's it. The Apple connector should be available in both web and native apps. Don't forget to [Enable connector in sign-in experience](https://docs.logto.io/docs/tutorials/get-started/enable-social-sign-in#enable-connector-in-sign-in-experience).
+
+# Apple 连接器
+
+## 开始上手
+
+如果你还不知道连接器的概念，或者还不知道如何将本连接器添加至你的「登录体验」，请先参见 [Logto 教程](https://docs.logto.io/zh-cn/docs/tutorials/get-started/enable-social-sign-in)。
+
+> ℹ️ **Note**
+> 
+> 如果你的应用有其他的社交登录方式，AppStore 要求必须同时有 Apple 登录。
+> 如果同时提供 Android 应用，在 Android 设备上同时提供 Apple 登录会让用户体验很棒。
+
+在继续前，你需要加入 [Apple Developer Program](https://developer.apple.com/programs/)。
+
+### 为你的应用启用「通过 Apple 登录」
+
+> ⚠️ **Caution**
+> 
+> 即使你只想在 web 应用中实现「通过 Apple 登录」，你仍需要拥有一个拥抱 AppStore 生态的应用（即：有一个有效的 App ID）。
+
+你可以通过 Xcode -> Project settings -> Signing & Capabilities 来启用，或者访问 [Certificates, Identifiers & Profiles](https://developer.apple.com/account/resources/identifiers/list/bundleId)。
+
+![Enable Sign in with Apple](/packages/connector-apple/docs/enable-sign-in-with-apple-in-xcode.png)
+
+参见 [Apple 官方文档](https://developer.apple.com/documentation/sign_in_with_apple/configuring_your_environment_for_sign_in_with_apple) 里的「Enable an App ID」章节以了解更多。
+
+### 创建一个 identifier
+
+1. 访问 [Certificates, Identifiers & Profiles](https://developer.apple.com/account/resources/identifiers/list/serviceId)，并点按在「Identifier」旁边的「+」按钮。
+2. 在「Register a new identifier」页面，选择「Services IDs」并点按「Continue」。
+3. 填写「Description」与「Identifier」（例如 `Logto Test` 和 `io.logto.test`），并点按「Continue」。
+4. 再次检查相关信息并点按「Register」。
+
+### 为你的 identifier 启用「通过 Apple 登录」
+
+点按你刚刚创建的 identifier。在详情页勾选「Sign in with Apple」并点按「Configure」。
+
+![Enable Sign in with Apple](/packages/connector-apple/docs/enable-sign-in-with-apple.png)
+
+在打开的对话框中，选择刚刚启用了「通过 Apple 登录」的 App ID。
+
+输入你的 Logto 实例域名（不含协议和端口），例如 `your.logto.domain`；并输入「Return URL」（即 Redirect URI）。Return URL 的值是 Logto URL 加上 `/callback/apple-universal`，例如 `https://your.logto.domain/callback/apple-universal`。
+
+![domain-and-url](/packages/connector-apple/docs/domain-and-url.png)
+
+点按「Next」以及「Done」以关闭对话框。点按右上角的「Continue」，接着点按「Save」以保存你的配置。
+
+> ⚠️ **Caution**
+> 
+> Apple _不允许_ HTTP 协议或 `localhost` 域名作为 Return URL。
+> 
+> 如果你想在本地进行测试，你需要编辑 `/etc/hosts` 文件以映射 localhost 到一个自定义域名，并设置一个本地的 HTTPS 环境。[mkcert](https://github.com/FiloSottile/mkcert) 可以帮助你设置本地 HTTPS。
+
+## 编写连接器的 JSON
+
+你需要使用在 [创建一个 identifier](#创建一个-identifier) 章节中填写的 identifier 来编写此 JSON：
+
+```json
+{
+  "clientId": "io.logto.test"
+}
+```
+
+## 测试 Apple 连接器
+
+大功告成。Apple 连接器应该在 web 和原生应用中都可用了。别忘了 [在登录体验中启用本连接器](https://docs.logto.io/zh-cn/docs/tutorials/get-started/enable-social-sign-in/#%E5%9C%A8%E7%99%BB%E5%BD%95%E4%BD%93%E9%AA%8C%E4%B8%AD%E5%90%AF%E7%94%A8%E8%BF%9E%E6%8E%A5%E5%99%A8)。

packages/connector-wechat-native/README.md

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ The official Logto connector for WeChat social sign-in in native apps (iOS and A
 
 ## Get started
 
-If you don't know the concept of the connector or haven't added this connector to your Sign-in experience yet, please see [Logto tutorial](https://docs.logto.io/docs/tutorials/get-started/enable-social-sign-in).
+If you don't know the concept of the connector or don't know how to add this connector to your Sign-in experience, please see [Logto tutorial](https://docs.logto.io/docs/tutorials/get-started/enable-social-sign-in).
 
 In native apps, you cannot use the web as a sign-in method of WeChat: navigation to the WeChat app is required, and it also requires using their SDK.
 
@@ -284,7 +284,7 @@ Once WeChat native connector is enabled, you can build and run your app to see i
 
 ## 开始上手
 
-如果你还不知道连接器的概念，或者还没有将本连接器添加至你的「登录体验」，请先参见 [Logto 教程](https://docs.logto.io/zh-cn/docs/tutorials/get-started/enable-social-sign-in)。
+如果你还不知道连接器的概念，或者还不知道如何将本连接器添加至你的「登录体验」，请先参见 [Logto 教程](https://docs.logto.io/zh-cn/docs/tutorials/get-started/enable-social-sign-in)。
 
 在原生应用中，你无法通过 web 进行微信登录：必须跳转至微信 app，并使用他们提供的 SDK 才能完成。
 
@@ -520,7 +520,7 @@ src/main/kotlin/com/sample/app/wxapi/WXEntryActivity.kt
 
 ## 测试微信原生连接器
 
-大功告成。别忘了 [在登录体验中启用社交登录](https://docs.logto.io/zh-cn/docs/tutorials/get-started/enable-social-sign-in/#%E5%9C%A8%E7%99%BB%E5%BD%95%E4%BD%93%E9%AA%8C%E4%B8%AD%E5%90%AF%E7%94%A8%E8%BF%9E%E6%8E%A5%E5%99%A8)。
+大功告成。别忘了 [在登录体验中启用本连接器](https://docs.logto.io/zh-cn/docs/tutorials/get-started/enable-social-sign-in/#%E5%9C%A8%E7%99%BB%E5%BD%95%E4%BD%93%E9%AA%8C%E4%B8%AD%E5%90%AF%E7%94%A8%E8%BF%9E%E6%8E%A5%E5%99%A8)。
 
 在微信原生连接器启用后，你可以构建并运行你的应用看看是否生效。
 

packages/connector-wechat/README.md

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ The official Logto connector for WeChat social sign-in in web apps.
 
 ## Get started
 
-If you don't know the concept of the connector or haven't added this connector to your Sign-in experience yet, please see [Logto tutorial](https://docs.logto.io/docs/tutorials/get-started/enable-social-sign-in).
+If you don't know the concept of the connector or don't know how to add this connector to your Sign-in experience, please see [Logto tutorial](https://docs.logto.io/docs/tutorials/get-started/enable-social-sign-in).
 
 > **⚠️ Caution**
 > 
@@ -90,7 +90,8 @@ Once WeChat web connector is enabled, you can sign in to your app again to see i
 
 ## 开始上手
 
-如果你还不知道连接器的概念，或者还没有将本连接器添加至你的「登录体验」，请先参见 [Logto 教程](https://docs.logto.io/zh-cn/docs/tutorials/get-started/enable-social-sign-in)。
+如果你还不知道连接器的概念，或者还不知道如何将本连接器添加至你的「登录体验」，请先参见 [Logto 教程](https://docs.logto.io/zh-cn/docs/tutorials/get-started/enable-social-sign-in)。
+
 > **⚠️ Caution**
 > 
 > 这个连接器只适用于网页应用。如果你在寻找移动端原生应用的微信登录解决方案，请移步 [微信原生连接器](https://github.com/logto-io/logto/tree/master/packages/connector-wechat-native)。
@@ -142,6 +143,6 @@ Once WeChat web connector is enabled, you can sign in to your app again to see i
 
 ### 测试微信网页连接器
 
-大功告成。别忘了 [在登录体验中启用社交登录](https://docs.logto.io/zh-cn/docs/tutorials/get-started/enable-social-sign-in/#%E5%9C%A8%E7%99%BB%E5%BD%95%E4%BD%93%E9%AA%8C%E4%B8%AD%E5%90%AF%E7%94%A8%E8%BF%9E%E6%8E%A5%E5%99%A8)。
+大功告成。别忘了 [在登录体验中启用本连接器](https://docs.logto.io/zh-cn/docs/tutorials/get-started/enable-social-sign-in/#%E5%9C%A8%E7%99%BB%E5%BD%95%E4%BD%93%E9%AA%8C%E4%B8%AD%E5%90%AF%E7%94%A8%E8%BF%9E%E6%8E%A5%E5%99%A8)。
 
 在微信原生连接器启用后，你可以构建并运行你的应用看看是否生效。