From bbb0239ac4573a686d5ff499ef36a26251403662 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Djordje Vlaisavljevic <dzvlais@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 1 Apr 2024 16:55:19 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Updated onboarding checklist copy

ref https://linear.app/tryghost/issue/IPC-98/copy-feedback
---
 .../app/components/dashboard/onboarding-checklist.hbs | 11 +++++++----
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/ghost/admin/app/components/dashboard/onboarding-checklist.hbs b/ghost/admin/app/components/dashboard/onboarding-checklist.hbs
index fbf0f814fd..dc582e1059 100644
--- a/ghost/admin/app/components/dashboard/onboarding-checklist.hbs
+++ b/ghost/admin/app/components/dashboard/onboarding-checklist.hbs
@@ -10,8 +10,11 @@
             </video>
         {{/if}}
         
-        <h2 class="gh-canvas-title">{{this.siteUrl}} is ready to go!</h2>
-        <p>Let's set your publication up for success.</p>
+        {{#if this.onboarding.allStepsCompleted}}
+            <h2 class="gh-canvas-title">You’re all set.</h2>
+        {{else}}
+            <h2 class="gh-canvas-title">Let’s get started.</h2>
+        {{/if}}
     </div>
 
     <div class="gh-onboarding-items">
@@ -37,8 +40,8 @@
             <LinkTo @route="lexical-editor.new" @model="post" class="gh-onboarding-item {{onboarding-step-class "first-post"}}" {{on "click" (fn this.onboarding.markStepCompleted "first-post")}}>
                 <Dashboard::Onboarding::Step
                     @icon="writing"
-                    @title="Create your first post"
-                    @description="Explore the editor and tell your story."
+                    @title="Explore the editor"
+                    @description="Get to know a writing experience you’ll love."
                     @complete={{is-onboarding-step-completed "first-post"}}
                 />
             </LinkTo>